tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5543518865370108627.post7891122519618580651..comments2010-08-18T00:03:02.183-05:00Comments on Winged Hippocampi: Smoke breakUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5543518865370108627.post-25095772729650101112009-06-07T22:09:37.369-05:002009-06-07T22:09:37.369-05:00I run on the East side of town near Festival Fiest...I run on the East side of town near Festival Fiesta?) Beach and this scene makes me think of that area- especially the parrots! I see them there all the time- there and Austin High.<br />At first I thought you were going down a path with the reference to the disaster vehicles (were they there to respond to something? Were there a bunch of bodies lying beyond the barbed wire?) but I enjoyed the scene you described.Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03608063616153763724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5543518865370108627.post-60928289081524696612009-06-06T02:51:32.578-05:002009-06-06T02:51:32.578-05:00um...ouch? The goal is to write something everyda...um...ouch? The goal is to write something everyday, but I assume my writing for this day is a failure?? Please give me specific criticism so I can improve :(skhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12017902570246580890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5543518865370108627.post-15391677638803967862009-06-06T02:21:37.751-05:002009-06-06T02:21:37.751-05:00assignment failassignment failDawson Clawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06024100675804885881noreply@blogger.com